Ok Here I'll Try Better. Your Fat Lazy And Most Likely Ugly. You Shouldn't Be Proud You Should Be Ashamed.

Ok here I'll try better. Your fat lazy and most likely ugly. You shouldn't be proud you should be ashamed. Trans? You'll never be the gender you desire. You'll be a pathetic faux version made through surgical mutilation and hormones you have to take forever. Your nothing but another spoiled mentally ill malcontent american brat who would serve the world best if you killed yourself. so get to it freak.

Good job! This is vastly improved, 7/10 easy. Still a couple tips, though!

Don’t use weasel words like “most likely” ugly. Commit to your insults!

I literally despise the concept of authenticity and would jump at the opportunity to tear my body to shreds and be reborn as a fucked up demon, so like, being a “pathetic faux version made through surgical mutilation and medical treatment” actually isn’t too bad to me. You’d need to know me better to be aware of that, though, so it’s understandable.

I mean, I still don’t give a shit, but what matters is that this was a learning experience for you. :)

reminder that i don’t use this blog (intentionally) anymore and that u should follow @maxiesatanofficial instead

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maxknightleyunofficial

9 years ago

#or at first they assumed they were magical items like the mirror or pillow #now im thinkin abt pearl grabbing a ring and asking 'ok this is pretty but what are its stats '#'im sorry?' #'what abilities does the ring possess flesh vessel'

What if the Gems walked into a jewelry store?

i think at this point the gems would come to terms with humans using items reminiscent of the slaughtered remains of their comrades as accessories