I'm so sick and tired of hearing about AI this AI that. AI is just recycling what people give it, it has no soul, thoughts, or feelings put into what it writes.
I shouldn't have to search an image, looking through it in an attempt to find out if it's real or not. I should not have to wonder if the story I'm reading is AI or not. Plagiarism checkers shouldn't need to have built in AI filters because so many people are using AI to do their assignments at school.
I'm not on the internet for a robot I'm here for what the internet was made for; To connect with and view the thoughts of others.
AI isn't magic, it doesn't have a brain, it can't think of original ideas.
I'm scared of posting my writings online sometimes tbh, bc I wonder not if people will like it, but if people will steal it and pump it into an AI. I want to do it though. But everyday I kinda wonder-
Is it even worth it if I'm just going to be phased out?
The pain of being criticized for your interests as a child really never subsides.
SYMBOLISM
A little shoutout to all the artworks where Ciel is literally food on a plate for Sebastian đŁ
Love them all <3
Guys... I might be the villain, But if I think I'm the Main Character and that makes me a villain. And I think I'm the villain... What am I???đđ
your villain doesnât need a tragic backstory, but it helps if they at least think theyâre the main character. delusional energy is key.
Some trash memes while waiting for spoilers
But where would you find a microwave that big?
put him in the microwave
note: pls donât tag as ship
May that damned architect be left in the farthest pits of Satan's abode
Anger can be one of the most intense, relatable emotions to readâand one of the trickiest to write. When handled well, an angry scene can pull readers deep into the emotional world of a character, building tension and driving the story forward. But when handled poorly, anger can easily slip into melodrama, making the characterâs feelings seem overblown, forced, or even cringe-worthy.
So how can you avoid these pitfalls and write anger that feels real and compelling? Here are some tips to make angry scenes powerful without overdoing it.
To write anger authentically, you need to understand its roots. People get angry for complex reasonsâfear, frustration, betrayal, grief, and even love. Ask yourself whatâs truly driving your characterâs anger. Are they afraid of losing control? Do they feel abandoned or misunderstood? Are they hurt by someone they trusted? Anger rarely exists in isolation, so dig into the deeper emotions fueling it.
When you understand the core reasons behind a characterâs anger, you can weave those nuances into the scene, making the anger more relatable and layered. Readers will feel the depth of the character's rage, not just the surface heat of it.
âShow, donât tellâ is classic writing advice, but itâs especially crucial in angry scenes. Donât rely on generic phrases like âShe was furiousâ or âHe clenched his fists in anger.â Instead, look for unique ways to convey how this specific character experiences anger. Maybe their voice drops to a deadly calm, or their eyes narrow in a way that makes everyone around them uncomfortable.
That said, showing too much can backfire, especially with exaggerated descriptions. Over-the-top body language, excessive shouting, or too many âflaring nostrilsâ can tip the scene into melodrama. Use body language and physical cues sparingly and mix them with subtler reactions for a more realistic portrayal.
People rarely say exactly what they feel, especially when theyâre angry. Angry dialogue isnât just about yelling or throwing out insults; itâs an opportunity to show the characterâs deeper thoughts and vulnerabilities.
Consider using controlled, icy responses or unexpected silences. Maybe your character says something hurtful in a low voice rather than screaming. They might express sarcasm, avoidance, or even laugh at the wrong moment. Anger often carries hidden layers, and using these nuances can help your characterâs dialogue feel genuine, even haunting, without falling into dramatic clichĂ©s.
The pacing of an angry scene can be the difference between a powerful moment and a melodramatic one. In real life, anger doesnât always erupt instantly; it can simmer, spike, or deflate depending on the situation and the characterâs personality. Experiment with different pacing techniques to create tension.
You might build the anger slowly, with small signs that somethingâs brewing. Or maybe the character explodes suddenly, only to calm down just as quickly, leaving a chill in the air. Controlling the pace helps you control the readerâs emotional engagement, drawing them in without overwhelming them.
When writing anger, avoid falling back on clichĂ©s like âseeing red,â âboiling with rage,â or âblood boiling.â These phrases have been overused to the point that they lose their impact. Instead, get creative and think about how your characterâs anger might feel specifically to them.
Maybe their skin feels prickly, or their jaw aches from clenching it. Think about details that are unique to the character and to the moment. By focusing on small, unique sensory details, youâll help readers feel the anger rather than just reading about it.
The setting can be an effective tool to amplify a characterâs anger without overstating it. Small details in the environmentâsuch as the hum of a refrigerator, the slow ticking of a clock, or the distant sounds of laughterâcan create a sense of contrast or isolation that heightens the characterâs rage.
For example, imagine a character seething in a peaceful park or a quiet library. The calm of the surroundings can make their anger feel more potent. Or maybe theyâre in a crowded, noisy room where they feel unseen and unheard, which fuels their frustration further. This use of setting can add depth to the scene without the need for dramatic gestures.
An effective way to avoid melodrama is to let the consequences of the anger show its intensity. Characters donât always have to yell or physically react; sometimes, a single choice can convey more than any outburst.
Perhaps your character cuts off a close friend or says something they canât take back. Maybe they throw away a meaningful object or walk out in silence. By focusing on the consequences of their anger, you can reveal the impact without over-explaining it.
Anger is rarely resolved in a single moment, and its effects often linger. When writing an angry scene, think about how it will affect your character moving forward. Are they holding onto grudges? Do they feel guilty or exhausted afterward? Does their anger transform into something else, like sadness or regret?
Allowing the anger to simmer in your characterâs mind even after the scene ends creates a more authentic and layered portrayal. It shows that anger is complex and doesnât just disappear the moment the scene is over, adding emotional weight to both the character and the story.
I FINALLY FINISHED A STORY
It's a short one (six chapters, 11 pages, 4k words) BUT I'VE NEVER FINISHED A WORK BEFORE.
Not gonna post it to tumblr but I may put out a snippet or two at some point.
Hi, welcome!!! You can call me Runa or Mythos, the choice is yours! She/Her.Professional yapper, if I talk I'm probably going to talk a lot. I write stories... Sometimes.I cannot draw for the life of me, so any art on my blog is NOT MINE and either from online, a friend, or a reblog.
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