Remember when I said this?
Finally finished and I'm worried about how you all will take it. Oh well. At least I got it somewhat edited.
AND Lurien's essay is now 45 pages AND I discovered a secret room that I thought was made up by the fans. Goodness gracious Lurien, WHY!!!!
Anyway...expect the next part to "What's up with the Dreamers' Houses?" really soon!
Lurien had to go hide more stuff inside his Spire. His essay is now 35 pages and counting. It might take a bit before the next part is up.
While I'm writing the next part, you all can go look inside his Spire and see if you can discover the really weird thing for yourself.
Family Portrait...or it will be once Lurien finishes his sketch!
I decided to give all three of them new outfits because of 1) time has passed and 2) Herrah is around to make her babies some cute outfits.
Reblog to tell me what you think!
BLURB:
Instead of Deepnest, the Knight went up through the City of Tears to escape. What would happen but being found and adopted by none other than the Watcher himself. But after the terrible discovery that the adopted has a twin in the White Palace, Lurien has only one desire-get HOME NOW.
SCRIPT: I have no clue how I left the Palace free, when I was shaking in my knees.
I hurried home, silently begging that my worst fears were not true. Certain members of our household would have preferred I was not so silent.
There, in all your imperfections and bedhair, you were perfectly fine. But Nothing was Perfectly Fine.
COVER:
https://www.tumblr.com/violetdawn001/738375072551682048/part-1-prologue?source=share
PREVIOUS CHAPTER:
https://www.tumblr.com/violetdawn001/739098346305781760/perfectly-not-fine-chapter-one?source=share
NEXT CHAPTER:
https://www.tumblr.com/violetdawn001/743988423774371840/perfectly-not-fine-chapter-3?source=share
Thank you all for reading and making it this far. Any form of support would be greatly appreciated.
SCRIPT:
Out of nowhere you came Needing someone to reach out, But no one came to take you home.
So I took you in and made you my own... Only to find troubles abound. You were... unexpected... So we were not prepared... When we found you were mute, Both of us grew frustrated... Combine these two with your eager curiosity... Made our first days quite Imperfect and unsatisfactory.
Somehow, all these imperfections... ...only made you more Perfect. ... How I wonder why He didn't see that...
NOTES:
My first attempt at a comic series. Let's see how far I can go. If you have any feedback, please feel free to comment down below. In the meantime, enjoy the show.
P.S. Thanks Aspidiske for inspiring me to do this. Keep up your amazing work.
LINKS: (When I get to them:)
Cover: https://www.tumblr.com/violetdawn001/738375072551682048/part-1-prologue?source=share
Part 1 / Prologue: You are here.
Part 2: Chapter 1:
https://www.tumblr.com/violetdawn001/739098346305781760/perfectly-not-fine-chapter-one?source=share